Offer Builder · a sample build

One profile in. A checked offer out.

A coach fills in her business profile once. The builder writes her first group offer from it, and code checks every claim against the profile before the offer is kept.

The member is invented. The model's writing is real.

Mara and Still Water Breathwork don't exist; I wrote her profile so nothing here belongs to a real person or client. The offers below are real model runs, recorded , shown as they came out. The checks and next steps run live in this page, in your browser.

Her business profile

Offer Builder

Her first group offer

Written only from her profile. Press the button to replay one of the recorded runs at its real speed.

  1. Read her profile
  2. Draft the offer
  3. Check every claim
  4. Plan her next steps

What the checks do

Eight checks before anything is kept

Price inside her range

The price has to sit inside the range she said she's comfortable charging.

Length and group size

The program shape stays inside limits she'd actually run.

Credential exactly as held

No upgrading a certification into a licence or a clinical title.

Testimonial word for word

Only a quote she has permission to use, copied exactly. Never a new one.

No cure or guarantee claims

Words like cure, heal, treat and guarantee are blocked outright.

Every number traces back

A number in the promise has to exist in her profile.

Name and inclusions fit

A short name and three to six things included.

House style

No em dashes. The kind of rule every brand has and every model forgets.

Want this built on your business?

Your intake form, your sales calls, your offer page or your recordings, with checks against your own facts before anything reaches a customer.

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